Monday, 20 June 2016

The Invisible woman



Reflection
I am learning to add detail and WOW word.  My next steps are to add capital letters in the right places.

1 comment:

Miss Kim said...

Well done Aston! I like that way that you have tried to add more detail by writing about all your ideas form your brainstorm and by adding WOW words. Remember to put all your full stops and capital letters in the right places.